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The Art of the Paragraph 20 November 2009 at 6:11 am by admin

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Anyone can write a paragraph, but not everyone knows how to write one that other people want to read.

You’ve seen it:

You open a book, and the whole page is one long block of text.

Each sentence in the paragraph makes exactly the same point, said in a slightly different way, and you wonder why they didn’t just say it once and be done with it.

Every paragraph is the same length (five lines, maybe?), whether it makes sense or not, and it gives the piece a monotonous rhythm.

The paragraph makes a point without telling you why that point is important, and you can’t help thinking, “So what?”

Like a little island, the paragraph doesn’t connect to any ideas that came before it or after it, and it seems vaguely out of place.

We all hate paragraphs that make these mistakes. Those of us who are in the National Society of Writing Snobs (raise your hand, if you’re a member) even get a weird sort of thrill from pointing them out.

Yet, somehow, they keep showing up.

Not just in the work of third graders, but in the writing of people who call themselves professionals, including yours truly.

It’s like Bill Murray and Richard Dreyfuss in the movie What about Bob? — every time you think they’re gone, you open the door, and there they are again, grinning and happy to see you.

The question is: what are you going to do about it?

It’s okay to write a bad paragraph, but publishing one will only endanger your bond with your readers. Before showing your writing to anyone, you should always go back through and check your paragraphs to make sure they are in tip-top shape.

Here are some questions to guide you:

1. Does it pass the Guy Kawasaki test?

You know how we all have blogging mentors who we look up to?

Well, Guy Kawasaki is one of mine. Three years ago, he wrote a post passing on some of his blogging wisdom, and one of his pieces of advice stuck with me:

. . . Imagine that there’s a little man sitting on your shoulder reading what you’re writing. Every time you write an entry, he says, “So what? Who gives a shiitake?” If you can’t answer the little man, then you don’t have a good blog/product.

It’s true. Every time you write a paragraph, stop for a moment and see if it passes the “Who gives a shiitake?” test. If you don’t have a good answer, then delete your paragraph and start over.

2. Is it a two-headed baby?

Babies are adorable. Two-headed babies, on the other hand, are something you would see on the cover of National Enquirer. It’s just

+ Friday Recap - Thursday Edition By admin 29 October 2009 at 3:39 pm and have No Comments

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I know you’re used to getting your recap on Fridays, but tomorrow’s our Halloween party! That translates to the entire BCI crew in spirited costumes having wicked good fun. What can I say? We love to dress up!

So there’s a good chance tomorrow will be a pretty hectic day, and since I plan to be among the undead, I can’t really count on much brain capacity. I figured why not serve up some recap while I’ve got the necessary presence of mind?

The Internet commemorates its 40th birthday today. Kind of. There are lots of milestones that could be counted as the “birth” of the Internet but the one that happened forty years ago today is the connection of to nodes of ARPANET. It’s like a big deal or something. Yay, Internet! [Officially Over the Hill. --Susan]

Turns out spending a couple hours a day online may actually be good for your mental health. A study suggests that the onset of dementia may be prevented or slowed by the brain stimulation caused by surfing the Web. If that’s the case, in sixty years there will be a whole bunch of sharp, old SEOs out there still doing their thing!

Or course, every tool that can be used for good can be just as easily used for trickery. This week a slew of celebrity robberies were blamed in part on the Internet.

screen captured from home page of latimes.com on Oct. 27, 2009

A group of teens (who went to school in my home town, actually — go Chargers!) are suspected of burglarizing a slew of homes belonging to young Hollywood stars. Police say the thieves used celebrity Web sites to track the celebrities’ whereabouts, providing the burglars easy access to empty homes and all the cool stuff therein. Spooooky! [Dear horrible people on the Internet. I never leave home and I have a shotgun. Love and kisses, Susan]

One of the suspects blamed her criminal activity on bad friends. Now that Google’s testing out the social space, it may be a little easier to stay connected with friends — hopefully just the good ones. Social Search launched in Google Labs this week and a bald-headed Matt Cutts has the honor of the intros.

News around Yahoo! was slightly less celebratory as Geocities said its goodbyes, taking a slew of personal, free Web sites with it. Bing, meanwhile, got into the holiday spirit with Halloween-themed ads. Together, the pair postponed their self-imposed search deal deadline citing the “complex nature of the transaction”.

Members of the search industry obviously keep up with the big three engines, but have you ever considered your alternatives? Over at Search Engine Watch Carrie Hill rounds up and categorizes AdWords alternatives, including PPC, cost-per-impression and cost-per-lead ad programs.

Directories have been touted as a potential source for inbound links. But one of the oldest and most authoritative directories, DMOZ, is notoriously difficult to get into. Seeking to uncover this thorn in the SEO industry’s side, Debra Mastaler talked to the Open Directory Project’s editor in chief in a revealing interview posted on Search Engine Land.

pink ribbon for breast cancer awareness

Finally, as October rolls to a close, so does National Breast Cancer Awareness Month. But the need for care and giving carries on. The search and social media marketers are supporting the cause through TwakeUp, a social media campaign in which all money raised will be given to the National Breast Cancer Foundation. You can make donations to this campaign through November.

Things I learned from Boing Boing this week:

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+ Has the Wild West Web Reached the End of the Line? By admin 22 June 2009 at 4:56 pm and have No Comments

vintage cowboys and a train
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In any society there are rules that govern the citizens. Many of the rules we follow in our communities today are explicit, spelled out in the form of laws or regulations. Others are implicit, coming out of necessity and an understanding of social norms, such as etiquette. Explicit rules are often formed as a reaction to events that have already taken place. For instance, a new law may prohibit acts that, through the hindsight of past events, are recognized as potentially harmful or damaging.

It’s long been believed that the Web is a land of lawlessness, notoriously hard to police, and comprised of communities inclined to do what they want without concern for rules. Over the last 20 years the Web has evolved from a small, undeveloped infant to a rebellious youth testing his limits. In many cases, the Web is governed by implicit rules, such as netiquette, while explicit rules are slowly finding their way onto the books. A parallel has been drawn between the Web and the American Wild West of the 1800s — a time when citizens knew better than to rely on those in uniform to protect them from corrupt and the codeless. I’ve heard the Web referred to as the realm of cowboys and bandits on blogs, in articles and at search conferences, and it’s been a pretty reliable analogy in that time. Even the common “white hat”, “black hat” terminology has its roots in the Hollywood heyday of Western films. But is it possible that the Web has reached a new era of liability and law?

four cowboys
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At Search Engine Watch, online marketing expert Frank Watson wrote a thought-provoking piece last week called The Web’s Wild West Days Are Gone. Frank points to evidence that the Internet is moving toward a more explicit model of governance. Close to home, we’ve seen legislation on behaviorally targeted ads, appointment of the U.S.’s first tech czar, and antitrust filings against search engine monopolies, to name a few examples. Abroad, we’ve watched the U.K. publish an action plan, South Korea pass legislation regulating comments on YouTube, and the Iranian and Chinese governments today control content via state-run ISPs.

Certainly there have been many earnest attempts to regulate what is made available online and what is accessible online, but I’m not convinced we’ve reached a time of law, enforcement and personal responsibility. Despite the best efforts of lawmakers at home and abroad, I see at least a few more obstacles that will need to be overcome before the Web transcends the Wild West. One significant challenge is that the Web is a global phenomenon, hard to subject to local or even national laws. One significant challenge is pointed out by commenter ProfJonathan on Frank’s article:

The challenges have been figuring out which law(s) apply, and how to enforce them. [...] the biggest challenge remains the borderless nature of the Internet and the conflicting legal regimes it crosses; a true international “Law of the Net” is clearly needed.

Additionally, lawmakers face a challenge in their lack of understanding. Remember when the National Association of Realtors (NAR) tried to convince their members that Google was a scraper site? Due to a technical misunderstanding and some convoluted assumptions, the NAR almost took their members’ sites out of the search game entirely. If the organization had followed through and established the guideline, real estate professionals would likely be hurting more than they already are.

In the end, we find that laws which aren’t grounded in understanding end up to be poorly written and ineffectively enforced. Any judgments that come out of such rules or legislation can hold no weight. Furthermore, laws that reach beyond their jurisdiction can hold no sway, and it’s a global Web we’re working in today. Until understanding and global enforcement are attained, I expect to see a familiar and untamed Web in the immediate future.

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